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Smile

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weightless
no price to pay
more than anything
free
pure and untouchable
that moment of joy
only to last a second
a millisecond
no more
the light atmosphere
takes me on a tour
of how much I could smile
because I never knew before
breathe so easily
with happiness in the air
earthbound
on a quest
will not rest
until another smile is found
For :iconlive-love-write: writing prompt :meow:
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RollingTomorrow's avatar
Thank you for participating in our prompt at #Live-Love-Write! :iconlaplz:

This poem was simple but still very expressive. :heart: Your lines were short and flowed quite well. Some areas of the poem were hinging on the repetitive side, but overall, it was a very enjoyable read! :la: Your closing statements were also very sweet and pleasant!

Keep up the good work!


*TheFinalHikari
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