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weightless
no price to pay
more than anything
free
pure and untouchable
that moment of joy
only to last a second
a millisecond
no more
the light atmosphere
takes me on a tour
of how much I could smile
because I never knew before
breathe so easily
with happiness in the air
earthbound
on a quest
will not rest
until another smile is found
no price to pay
more than anything
free
pure and untouchable
that moment of joy
only to last a second
a millisecond
no more
the light atmosphere
takes me on a tour
of how much I could smile
because I never knew before
breathe so easily
with happiness in the air
earthbound
on a quest
will not rest
until another smile is found
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This poem was simple but still very expressive. Your lines were short and flowed quite well. Some areas of the poem were hinging on the repetitive side, but overall, it was a very enjoyable read! Your closing statements were also very sweet and pleasant!
Keep up the good work!
*TheFinalHikari
Founder of #Writers--club, #LandoftheSky, and #Live-Love-Write
This poem was simple but still very expressive. Your lines were short and flowed quite well. Some areas of the poem were hinging on the repetitive side, but overall, it was a very enjoyable read! Your closing statements were also very sweet and pleasant!
Keep up the good work!
*TheFinalHikari
Founder of #Writers--club, #LandoftheSky, and #Live-Love-Write